How offensive should really be done. Need I say more?
Fantastic job to both Weebl and PEAB0. Weebl, I believe that this Savlonic song was done better than Wandering Eye with it's smoother feel, and an opening that doesn't rush into the song, but gives you time to adjust to the feel which is something that I was slightly agitated with when listening to Wandering Eye (though it is still a wonderful song) 5/5. PEAB0, your animations for Savlonic are above par by a major percentage, and watching these videos really makes me just feel giddy being able to watch an animation which has so much fluent movement, amazing character drawing (though the 4 fingers on the hands does annoy me a touch, but I never lessen an animator for that because it is one of the hardest things to pull off really well at times). The one thing I would say is to put a bit more detail into backgrounds, such as during the mustang going over the bridge, there wasn't much detail on the bridge itself, and a little something in the background wouldn't have hurt just for a little filler, even something like a couple little clouds. Also during the bath running part I could have used a touch more detail, or another item that was on/in the tub, and the flooded room downstairs was a little too simple, because when the girl comes into the frame, it looks slightly strange with a detailed woman set in a room with little detail. Overall, the characters are very well done (and have developed a little more since Wandering Eye), the fluent movement of everything and the detail on everything in main frame is amazing, but be wary of some backgrounds because even though some were very well done, some just seemed empty or slightly too simplistic 4/5 Keep up the good songs and smashing animations, and I can't wait to hear another Savlonic song -Staadsy
If this was a usual one of my reviews it would be lengthy and very detailed, but I haven't much time at the moment, so I will put it to you simply. The voice acting is not done well, and the type animation good be done quite better. Don't try to rip off a voice, create one of your own, and don't crowd screen with type, or use a colour that doesn't agree with the others (the "so creative" is an example during the epik!, awesome, etc.). 6/10 Be wary my friend, making a fan piece is alright, but if you do, include your own style in someway and don't just try to make a recreation of what they did, because it will not go over that well in the long run. At first there will probably be a few laughs, but with out originality, it will fade -Staadsy
The thing about this animation is that it's overall fairly good, and I probably would have given it a nine if it were not for the fact that it looks like a cheap version of one of JohnnyUtah's animations. Your animation, humour, and style overall seems to be a bad version of JohnnyUtah's. If you are trying to base your animation style on his, I'd give you one thing, change up some things and don't try to copy, just create your own, take hold of your own personal style. One thing I would really like to see is better character shading and better lip syncing, those are the things you should work on right now. 6/10 Take hold of your own style and don't just create a badly photocopied version of somebody else's style, you have much potential, so work hard on shading, your own style and lip syncing, which I know all of those are hard, but they are needed right now for you to truly take hold of your true potential -Staadsy
Not quite with the time
I don't usually review animations that I'm not particularly fond of, but I think I should let you know of some things. This animation is to say the least, bad. I'm sorry to inform you of this, but you deserve to know. This kind of animation, a stick animation, can only get away with how it is if it was: A. A good quality, funny one that wasn't just crude or stupid humour, or B. If it was 1999-2003. I can't say that either of these are true about this animation; it's crude, dumb and overall just ill timed in this day and age. 1/10 Just to tell you, the one, is for effort. I would've given you two, but you took six days of your life to make it. If this lasts the week and makes Underdog, you can call me stupid or whatever the hell you want. It just really isn't good, and I hate to break it to ya -Staadsy
No i am not going o call you stupid or anything like that but i was just lazy to make something with a good quality. I guess you're right
The kind of animation worth reviewing
It's not that often that I get to review something as amazing as this, and I'm always filled with joy when I have the ability to truthfully say that. This is some very well done animating that works well with the theme, style, and execution along with the animation really bringing out the feeling of the music and how the music is playing. 10/10 This isn't a longer review because there is not much to say besides the fact that, like some others, this animation is of the top quality, tier, caliber, or whatever else you want to call it. People that have this kind of directing skill, that can own their animating style, take their means and use them to make something above and beyond, and make someone like me, who takes a lot to truly impress, want to watch a certain animation every time they visit Newgrounds, truly marks something that deserves #1 on the Portal. I can't wait to see your next project, but you're gonna have to do something just as impressive, so good luck, and keep up the fantastic work -Staadsy
This deserves its place in the top 100
Well to be honest this is one of the greatest voice acting feats I've heard on Newgrounds, and I am very pleased to say that is the truth. This has a beautiful ensemble of three ingredients put together perfectly: Voice, Music, and Animation. The music fit perfectly to this animation and it succeeds in bringing out the total stupidity of the User. I've always been a fan of the typographical animation, and seeing one of this caliber really makes me feel that more can be done with them than what some people do with them (like when someone will post a video on YouTube of a song with the lyrics and just having them appear. Where as if they did something with the words people would probably like it a lot more). 10/10 This is a superb animation that succeeds in every form of humour, keeping the audience captivated, and making sure to not let the audience get bored for a split second. This is one of the things that make me feel like Newgrounds isn't just filled with 11 year olds being little assholes and posting stupid animations, so thanks for keeping my spirit alive, and hope for Newgrounds alive, again, with this extremely humourous animation
You can't make me blam this
This, to be honest, is a very funny cartoon that I enjoy every time that I've watched it. It's very witty humour and makes me feel that, even though I live in a America, I understand the damned weather patterns over there that really do suck. On a little more serious note, I love these types of videos you've done, Australia, Wales, what's next? I would love to see more of these because whenever I'm in that mood where you want to quote something I always at some points say, "Come to Australia! You'll pro. bably. diiiiiiiiiiiiiiie!" and to me, being quotable truly makes you now when you've got a funny video. 10/10 I do love your animation style so, and it really does fit with your humour. The simplicity, yet it has some detail, fits with your random, yet witty humour. Keep up the good work
I can't fap to this and I'm happy to say that
Surprisingly enough this is my first time commenting on one of your submissions even though I've been watching them for some time now. This, like the rest of your animations, is great in the way that it is so crude, vile, and overall unsettling that it makes me want to go into my kitchen and down the nearest bottle of vodka because I am ready to have fun now. On a serious note your animations, and this one is no exclusion, are extremely well done and do always make me laugh no matter how many times I see it. 10/10 You really have found your animation style and seemingly recurring theme and it works great. I can't wait to see what you make next
haha "seemingly recurring theme", thanks!
I have watched this animation 1,000 times and every time it's as funny as the last. For 2004 animation I have to give it props for how well it's done for the kinds of programs available at the time to the masses. 10/10 It succeeds in its humour and to me that's all this animation needs to be a Newgrounds classic
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